The Gym At My School

By kidscom

The Gym

My favorite place is the gym.  I play Head Hunter.  I see Alder and Joaquin and Jason trying to get me with those balls.  I feel great when I don’t get hit with those balls.  I smell sweat in the air.  When we are done, still Alder and Jason and Joaquin and Joseph are the winners!

by Annalyn

20 Responses to “The Gym At My School”

  1. Mr. Mac Says:

    Great job on the Fall Creek logo Annalyn. That and the sunshine in the windows really makes the gym feel like a warm, friendly place. Well, at least when you’re not being “head hunted.”

  2. Adele Says:

    I loved the gym ,it looks real.

    adele adele adele

  3. annalyn Says:

    I love my picture.

  4. Hannah Says:

    Annalyn,

    I like your picture.

  5. Hannah Says:

    Sweet pic.

  6. Hannah Says:

    Dude, I like your picture.

  7. Hannah Says:

    Nice going.

  8. Hannah Says:

    Cool pic.

  9. Sean Says:

    I like to play tag in the gym. And I like to play wild!

  10. Liana Says:

    Dear Annalyn I really like your picture a lot. I know that Alder is really good at dodge ball. He hits you really hard. It does not feel good. My favorite game is capture the flag.

  11. Eva.C Says:

    Dear Annalyn I really like your picture I like the gym to. My favorite game is capture the flag.

  12. Robin Says:

    I like your picture. And I like where you hid your name.

  13. Mommy & Daddy Says:

    What a great picture and story Annalyn! We know how much you love playing Head Hunter – just hope you don’t get hit in the head too many times!!
    love,
    Mommy & Daddy

  14. Zoe Says:

    Dear Annalyn, I remember you from kindergarden! Gym is my favorite place to be, too. It’s cool how you hid your name by the window. I like the colors you picked. Your story is nice also. Great job!

  15. Travis Says:

    What dus the gym luk like?

  16. Kevin Says:

    I like your picture.And how you hide your name good job.

  17. Ben Says:

    Hello Annalyn I like the gym at my school too my favoret game is socer.

  18. censear Says:

    I love to play In the gym too.But how do you play the hunter?Do you like to play dogball? I do.

  19. Casey Says:

    I like gym also my favrite game is basketball.

  20. Ms. Atkin (Roman's grandma) Says:

    Wow! The way you used words like “sweat” and “feel” made your writing interesting. Good job.

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