I wish I lived in the country.
I love seeing the deer every morning when I wake up and look out the window. I like the fresh air because it reminds me of spring in the morning. Every morning I like hearing the quiet when I open the door. In the summer, I like to pick berries that are juicy like watermelons.
I wish I could ride the school bus because if I could ride the school bus, I would have a fun time going to school. I wish I could have a bus to ride because it would not waste gas. I wish people wouldn’t run over animals because then we would have more animals.
I would really want to live in the country.
By Jiji
February 8, 2007 at 6:19 am |
Hi Jian,
I love how you wrote that you can hear the quiet when you open the door. It made it easy for me to imagine being in the country. You did a super job writing this persuasive essay and I’m proud of you.
Love,
Mihal
February 12, 2007 at 8:43 pm |
I love seeing the deer in the morning with you, and hearing the quiet and smelling the smells. I also like taking you to school in the morning, but I wish we did not use the gas. I would miss you if you took the bus.
December 28, 2007 at 7:34 pm |
I like your picture.